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Jeremy Smith


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2015-08-28T03:27:38.648Z
Casting, yes. Cinematography, yes. Music, yes. Feels like a modernized John Hughes movie - which I'd watch.
Reviewed: 2015-08-28T13:07:28.457Z
Looks like you've captured the modern-day workplace, and made it endearing. Loved the involvement of more than one person with physical challenges. I'd totally watch this, after the kids were asleep.
Reviewed: 2015-08-28T13:07:28.457Z
I'm there. Really impressed with the use of graphic art. Music was spot-on. The smile never left my face. But what will the show look like?
Reviewed: 2015-08-28T04:15:54.366Z
Canadian office, set in some kind of an arcade/gag shop? Funny banter. Had a hard time seeing where it was going; but you got me to want to see more.
Reviewed: 2015-08-28T04:15:54.366Z
Build your own society is better than compete in random challenges; but tone down the drama, please. Reminds me too much of work.
Reviewed: 2015-08-28T03:45:07.980Z
Thanks...2015-10-06T05:51:08.651Z
Could be good, with tighter costuming and period facial hair, for instance. I do like the exploration into a tough and critical period in our history.
Reviewed: 2015-08-28T03:45:07.980Z
Thanks. Good points. Very helpful.2015-10-06T05:55:09.964Z
Tighten up the blocking and action, and you might have something. It got really good when God texted Kevin to stop being an ass.
Reviewed: 2015-08-28T03:36:55.437Z
Decent premise; gotta ditch the cheesy reality show background music. Watch out for archaelogic integrity - this belongs in a museum!
Reviewed: 2015-08-28T03:36:55.437Z
Many thanks for your kind review...2015-10-06T05:34:53.961Z